Wednesday 19 August 2015

Speech marks

Speech Marks

I wrote a twist on demon dentist and I had to put all the speech marks on each sentence. We had to use either demon dentist or wonder.

This is the story.


“Hello my dear, what is your name?” questioned Miss Root slowly.
“My name is Jeff,” giggled Alfie.
“NO it is Alfie,” SHRIEKED Miss Root. “I have been stalking you!”
“HOW dare you!” shouted Alfie angrily.
“Now let me look at your teeth potato man,” demanded Miss Root.
“NO,” Alfie said as he slowly walked towards the door.
He opened the door and ran to his flying potato and zoomed off to the Uncle Bills to by a broomstick to hit her in the face.

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