This is a blog post about my story. We based it off the story foul shot which was in a basketball match with 5 seconds left. We used things like verbs, 2 stanzas one about you and one about the equipment and we had a new action every line.
With only 10 seconds left of the game,
And a solemn boy dribbling the ball,
Comes into the D
Comes up to take a shot,
Lines his shoulders up,
The ball soars,
Floats like it’s in slow mo,
Plays it coy,
The crowd is silent,
It ricochets the goalie ……
He runs and high- fives everybody.